TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[B4You - Give Me More]

I like the texture and the energy. The fade-in at the beginning was a bit of a lazy start to the piece IMO, but you made up for it with the refreshing synths and the clean mix. I like the melodies at 1:03. You may have overdone the reverb a tad there, but the melody itself has a great victorious feel to it. It's a feel-good track, but I think you could've done more to give it some shape and dynamic contrast. The ending was about as lazy as the beginning, and I would've liked to see a breakdown or bridge for variety at some point. The energy level and texture is nearly constant throughout, which doesn't make for a fully engaging listening experience. That's definitely the main problem here, though. Cool sound design, solid production quality, and nice work with the mood and atmosphere. Keep it up, dude!

BlackVen0m4you responds:

Yeah i know what you are talking about! You are absolutely right about it. I´ll update it later. Thank you for the feedback! And i´m glad you liked it! :)

[Iori Licea - Winter (NiTi Remix)]

Fun and upbeat track overall. The intro was a bit bizarre. There was nothing that predicted the introduction of the melody, chords, and vocals at :11. The chord progression itself was also a bit cliché, and the instrumentation (mostly the synths) are pretty generic in general. I like the melodic content, and the mix is generally clean. I would've liked to see you vary the melodies later on in the track, though. It just felt like you didn't do much different or variational in the second half of the piece. It's not a bad track at all - it has a cute mood, smooth transitions, and strong melodies. But it's also not very original IMO, and I think that's my main problem here. Otherwise, solid work! Keep at it, man.

TodukenMusic responds:

Thanks for the review! It's the first time I've done UK hardcore, so it's not the big deal, but something is something hehe

[Finish Line!]

Fun sound design and fresh rhythmic elements. Some of the chord progressions are a little unoriginal (I'm eyeing the descending thing that first appears at :08), though. The melodic content at :40 is pretty cool, and I also like the prominent slap bass at :57. The mix is clean and bright, although I think the kick could've been a little more...conspicuous. There are a lot of creative ideas in here, like the xylophone solo at 1:40 or so. By the end of the piece, it gets a tad repetitive, and I think it needed a bridge or breakdown section to give it a little more shape. Nevertheless, I like the danceable, victorious vibe here. I hope you're still enjoying your gap year, and here's to 2018! ;)

LunacyEcho responds:

lmaoooo i never realized how much i use the descending chord progression until miyo sarcastically commented on it once and now i feel guilty every time i use it XD

but thanks for the comment! hope you're enjoying college, and same to you for the year to come!! :)

[Exterminator Groove]

Really quite groovy! I can totally see the Johnfn influence in the instrumentation. :D I think the snare doesn't quite pop enough, though. I'd suggest giving the treble end a boost in the equalizer. This piece has a lot of fun riffs, but seems a little patched-together. The melodic content is really cool, but some of the transitions were smoothed over with a simple snare fill or crash, and I think you can come up with something more creative than that. Overall, though, really fun and catchy piece. Keep it up, LE! ;)

[Promised Land]

I like the nature sounds and the bright strings. Reminds me of some of Waterflame's old tracks when he used to do more orchestral stuff. The melodic content is nice, and I like the ornaments (e.x., :55). May I ask where the string samples are from? I love the woodwind solos that start at around 1:35 - that's probably my favorite part of the piece, in fact. Excellent progression and harmonies throughout, guys. I'm a huge fan of the bells during the outro as well. Nice job bringing out the emotion. You really painted a picture with this one. Congrats on the 5th place finish! :)

Everratic responds:

The string samples are from Kontakt Factory Library, which came with Komplete 11. I'm glad you liked the woodwind solos! It received a bit of criticism for being melodically divergent, but I still don't regret it.

Thanks for the review! :)

[Spirit of the Lilies]

Very calming and majestic mood at the beginning. I like the progression/build-up at around the 1-minute mark. The drop is cathartic and not too heavy, and also has some really fun rhythmic elements. The mix is super loud and crisp and clean as always. I also really like the reverb-heavy beat at 2:45. That section functions really well as a breakdown. I really like when your song's two refrain sections are so well-varied, yet the song maintains a lot of its coherence through the chord structure and instrumentation. That's worked well for you in the past (e.x., Volt), and it works well here too. Those emotional piano outros get me every time. :') If I had to criticize one thing, it might be that your style has become a tad formulaic. Your tracks tend to have a very similar progression and sound design. That said, taken by itself this is another killer track. Keep up the good work, Lockyn! ^^

Lockyn responds:

Thank you for the feedback as always TL. I agree with you - I try to shake things up, but this track definitely falls back on some of my usual patterns. Hope you enjoyed regardless. :)

[Rebuilding the haven]

I like the atmosphere, warm synths, and crisp drums. I think you could've used a bit of a smoother transitions into 1:00, 2:58, and 4:45 - just a little something to foreshadow the changes in energy level there. I think you did a better job of that at the transition at 2:00, though. The mid-range bass there is great, and everything sits nicely in the mix. At times, I thought the drum part could be a bit more creative, and the melodies could be a bit more complex, especially for such a long piece. That said, overall this piece is really enjoyable and cleanly produced. Keep up the great work, man! You just earned yourself a scout. ^^