The synths at the beginning are cute, if a little generic. I found the melodies at :16 to be a little too jumpy (as opposed to stepwise). It made them a bit hard-to-follow musically, and also jarring to the listener. If you wanted to orchestrate more of a call-and-response kind of thing, I would’ve at least used different instruments for the higher and lower sections of the melody. The piece has a cool mood and atmosphere, although I think it doesn’t have a lot of coherence. I think you’d be well-advised to flesh out the structure a little more here. The ending is a little abrupt as it is. Also, once the synths are in full swing, the drums are a little weak. I think you need to look into some mixing techniques, like equalization and compression, especially for the drums. The vocal samples are cute here, though, if a little overused. I’ve been tough on you in this review, but I think an important next step for you would be to create more structural contrast - sections that are quieter and less busy amidst the frantic, melodic ones you have here. Do that, and I think the composition of this piece would be really strong. I’d encourage you to keep working on this piece. Keep at it, man. ;)
5.5/10