I like the concept a lot. It's pensive and inward-looking, and the somewhat simplistic design calls attention to the abstract thinking behind it. The animation quality is not superb, but for what it is I like it. :)
I like the concept a lot. It's pensive and inward-looking, and the somewhat simplistic design calls attention to the abstract thinking behind it. The animation quality is not superb, but for what it is I like it. :)
thanks! I'd really like to get better at animation, but I have NO idea what I'm doing. It's a hobby I'd like to pursue under the occasional guidance of those who know more than me.
Great work! I like the drama, music, and animation quality. You made a lot happen in 30 seconds. I'm impressed. Keep it up, dude! ;)
thanks, i guess quality over quantity is the trick
Pretty cute. Reminds me of the Pixar intro. Animation quality is good, and the little brass flair at the end ties it together well. Solid work, man.
Thank You!
This is really cool. I love the interactive element of it. Impressive that you both animated it and wrote the music too. Keep it up, man. ;)
As much as I love animating as a hobby and create music just for fun, (and a GMod-er)
Thank you! Much appreciated! :D
This is pretty cool. The animation quality is good, and I like the music. It doesn't really loop that well, though, and could use some more structure. I think it would be better if you expanded on it a bit. Still, nice work, though. ;)
Right, so maybe i should have explained this. This is not an original entry per say. It is a 6 sec contribution that will be par of a biger project. The chalenge was to interpret the music however we wanted... Thanks anyway for the revew, i really wish i had more time to work on this.
The animation quality is pretty good, but I think this could've really used some more plot/dialogue. There isn't even any sound - some music would really help make this more interesting. I'm not sure why it needed to be almost 2 minutes long either. You should keep working at it! ;)
Mostly for testing purposes, to go through the process to see if my machine could render it, convert it, upload it, otherwise there's no point trying for a longer animation next time. Also, YouTube has a thing about videos under 60 seconds, even if it's 59 seconds, and also it'll round down a second sometimes as well even when I've tried in Adobe Premiere. Audio wasn't a concern as much as the rest, and I didn't feel like pasting some creative commons or royalty free bland music over it. I will have more to show in my work on my next animation.
Not bad. Voice acting is pretty good, and the animation quality is higher than average for NG. I might recommend using some reverb/flanger effects if you were going for a sort of spooky ending, instead of just increasing the volume on the laughter. It's really short as it is, though. You should expand more upon this idea. ;)
thank's man really appreciate the feed back
Hmm...the voice acting and animation were really good, and the plot was pretty amusing. I thought the facial expressions were particularly well done. The language was bothering me a bit, though. I think this should be rated "M," not "T." Otherwise, it was definitely entertaining throughout. Nice work! ;)
hmmmm yea, might have to change that
This is really cool, and a nice surprise that you're extending your skills on NG to the realm of movies. ;) I don't know much about animation, but I think you did a really good job for your first film, and I like the attempt at plot development and all. That said, it was kind of hard to follow the story. I was confused by the end. Overall, though, I liked it a lot. You have real potential, my friend, and I loved the music, btw! :D
I glad to see that you enjoy this movie. Storyline is hard implemented becouse i tried to make it in easy way :-). Next time i try to make story more understandable.
It's actually really good. The quality of animation and sound was really high. My only complaints are that the dialogue was a bit dull at times, and that their lips rarely moved besides to express that they were talking/not talking. Overall, though, nice work, man! ;D
Thank you :) I know the lip-syncing is bad, I just couldn't motivate myself to finish it properly, so I stuck to a simpler version so I could finally get this thing out. Next episode will be much better ;)
Hi. I'm Andrew. Audio portal junkie since 2010, supporter since 2017. I always want to improve what I do! I make music, run the NGUAC, post poetry on BBS, and am the all-time #2 audio reviewer. I love this site, and I want to make it the best I can! ^_^
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