TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Improvisation #1: I Will Wait For You]

I really like the soothing guitar at the beginning. The little flourishes (like at :27) are really impressive, and the flow is rather smooth. The very ending felt a tad rushed (just the final chord, really), but the biggest problem with the structuring imo is that there wasn’t enough of it. I feel like with solo instrument tracks, it’s really important to create variety along parameters like dynamics, energy levels, pacing, etc., because it’s inherently hard to create variety with the sound design. So, I guess that’s all to say that the composition could’ve been a tad more dynamic here along some of those other parameters. The recording quality is great, but there are a couple of small moments where you seem to hit the strings unintentionally (notably :59). The melodic content here is really nice, though, and you nailed the relaxed and somewhat wistful mood here. I still think the composition could be fleshed out a little more, but it’s good to hear a raw and organic submission like this. Keep at it, Thomastique! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8/10

Thomastique responds:

Thank you! I will definitely keep all of this in mind for the future, great feedback!

[Departure from Remorse]

I like the quirky percussion and ominous synths toward the beginning. The riff at :12 has a lot of movement, but the rhythm is a bit square. Meanwhile, I really like the contour and syncopations of the melody at 1:12, but the synth itself sounds a bit harsh. I also think the structure of this piece felt a bit cyclical, and could’ve used some more shape, perhaps via a more atmospheric or downtempo breakdown/bridge. Still, the sound design and mood really make the piece what it is. Overall, my main complaints are with the composition here - it needed a stronger sense of direction over time imo. Still, the mixing is also solid, and I could see this fitting in really well in a videogame. The eerie tone and catchy melodies only bolster that fact. Keep at it, Tebyricat! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8/10

[A Major Delight - NGUAC 2020]

I like the easy flow and catchy melodies of this one. The strings at the beginning aren’t really playing on top of the beat, which bothered me a little - I can’t tell if it’s the sample or some sort of mixing effect. The percussive rolls during transitory moments are really nice in this piece. Sometimes the rhythm of the lead is a little hard to follow, like at :39 for example, and the string harmonies could’ve sounded a little more distinct in the mix there. The brass section at 1:25 felt a little bare, and I feel as though the texture could use some shake-up to the instrumental hierarchy, as right now it feels like a procession of short solos. The injection of intensity at 2:18 was quite welcome, though, and helps hit the piece home well. My main complaints are probably with the generally thin texture and lack of structurally variety here. Still, the melodic content and sound design are strong as usual with you, and there’s a good amount of development in the melodic themes to keep things interesting later on. Keep at it, Spcialist! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.75/10

NativeNiles responds:

Hey, thx for the review, Im glad you like it.

[Shanlix - Fallen [House] (for NGUAC 2020)]

I like the cute synths and atmosphere at the beginning. There’s a good sense of climax into :30 and again into :45. The melodies at :45 are nice, even if the chord progression is a bit cliche. Some of the melody synths are a bit cheesy, and I would’ve liked the clap to pop a bit more in the mix during the refrain. The breakdown at 1:15 was good for some structural variety, but in general the second half of the piece could use some more variation, especially regarding the harmonic framework and main melodies. It also would’ve been nice to have more of a proper outro here, especially since the piece was already pretty short as it was. Overall, one of my biggest problems with the piece might be how generic it is, from the chord progression to the arrangement to the transitions. Despite my complaints about the lack of variety and compositional details, the mixing and melodies are highlights here. It’s a catchy piece with a blissful mood. Keep at it, Shanlix! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.25/10

[Runa - Lemonium]

I like the quirky synths at the beginning and the gradual fade-in. The mixing is really solid, and the rhythmic content is great. The chopped vocals that become really exposed at :30 are really cool, and I’m enjoying the build-up into :52. The drop is pretty minimal, but also catchy and feels saturated with the compression and reverb. The more mellow, atmospheric bridge at 1:45 is a nice point of structural contrast, and I love the crisp hi-hats in the upper register there. Some of the elements of the arrangement here are a little cliche, though. I also might’ve liked to see you vary the drop a little more the second time around. Overall, I think the production quality is probably the strongest element of the piece, even if the compression is rather heavy at times. The composition has some catchy riffs, but the melodic side could be a bit more compelling, especially after the intro. Still, the sound design and atmosphere really won me over here. Keep at it, Runanova! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8/10

[the end of pluto (shot in 4k with a .50 cal) - a travesty we're sure]

I like the sharp percussion and gritty bass at the beginning, and the dynamic bass line at :16 combined with the airy, ominous pads is really nice. The synth that enters at :48 sounds a little indistinct imo, and probably could do with a dial-back on the reverb. I like the melodies from 1:23 on, and it was a nice touch that the piece came full-circle at 2:27. Seems like this would even make a nice loop. That said, I think the composition could’ve been a bit more dynamic at times - after :16, the energy level and core harmonic framework rarely changes. Most of the variety in this piece comes from adding or subtracting instruments over time, whereas I think it would’ve helped channel the emotion more if you had some more phrasing, automation, and/or volume changes. Still, the piece comes together well by the end. The mixing is solid, and the progression and melodies are enjoyable here. Keep at it, Rat9352! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.75/10

[Way to the Freedom]

I like the echo-y vocals and relaxed guitars at the beginning. The clap sample is a bit cheesy, and the vocal editing isn’t perfect, but I like the lyrics (thanks for the translation!). The vocals sit well in the mix, but could also blend better given all the layering. Reverb could do a bit of that work, but in some cases you might consider re-recording, especially in places where the backing vocals seem to have a slightly different inflection as the lead. There are also moments when the calibration is a little off, like at 2:53. I like the mellow, spacey breakdown at 2:15, and structurally the piece works pretty well. I was also a fan of the melodic “yah-yah” flourish at 3:35 and other places. The production quality is also solid overall. I think my main complaint here is that the vocal editing is a bit rough around the edges, but the instrumental tracks could also use some more variety at times. Still, solid work with the mixing, atmosphere, and progression. Keep at it, Ragkul! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
7/10