I like the cheesy piano riffs at the beginning and the cutesy electronic elements that come in soon after. The melodies at :20 or so really remind me of 2014 Johnfn. :) The panning is a little heavy for my tastes, though, and some of the transitions are a little sudden (like :34). The melodies at :50 are really good, but I can't help but feel that the balance in the texture is a little off at 1:05, with the chords/harmonies overwhelming the melodies. Same thing at 1:27, but at least you've got a thematic justification for it, lol. The melodies in the last minute, especially with the flute at 2:25, are also solid. I especially like the heavy bass drum at 2:10 or so. Overall, strong work! I hope you'll post here more frequently over the summer - also, we should catch up sometime. PM me. ^^