TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hope (Piano)]

Ah, I love piano music. Excellent sense of progression and harmony here, Phonometrologist. It has a heaviness to it, yet at the same time it flows beautifully. It does get a bit repetitive after a while, though. I suppose you could've added some more creative rhythms. Still, it's very majestic. As a stand-alone piece, it might need more rhythmic variation, but it would probably fit very well in certain video games. I really like the way you gradually stripped away the energy at the end. It made it feel really conclusive. Overall, nice job! Keep up the good work, man. ;)

Phonometrologist responds:

Thanks TaintedLogic. I've always considered this piece to reflect the eb and flow of the ocean when it comes to the repetitive nature of this. But this was an improvisation as I didn't put too much thought into specific notes but rather just the overall mood and direction of it. Thank you for listening

[Chillax]

Chill, huh? More like "get abducted by aliens." 0_O Seriously, though, I love the creepy, bassy beats. A lot of the sound effects were cool, although I think you could've done a lot more with this. I'm thinking some haunting lead and mid-range chords. This track is missing a lot of higher frequencies, although it's still a really cool idea. I love the mood and atmosphere. I also think it could've potentially looped really well if it hadn't cut off 10 seconds before the track ended. Bit of a disappointment. I hope you find the motivation to do more with this! Also, how's senior year going? ;D

[Archaic Oblivion]

I like the dark pads and nature FX at the beginning. It has this really apprehensive, yet also relaxed mood about it. I think you went a little overboard on the white noise effects, but the mood here is great. I wish it progressed a little faster, though. You left yourself a lot of space for contrast and climax that you didn't really capitalize on that well. I know it's supposed to be very laid-back, easy listening, but I wish there was more engaging and melodic content here. It's extremely long for having such little melodic content. Still, for what it is it's not a bad first track at all. The white noise is still the main thing that bothers me. I think you need to both a) equalize it so it's less prominent in the mix and b) add more creative effects to it to make it more interesting. Right now, it sort of just steals the show from what few notes you actually have in there, like at 4:37 for example. I really like the title here, though, and I think you've shown some potential with this track. Tell you what: if you upload another track here that displays a broader skill set, PM me and I'll scout you. Good luck, man! ;)

WazeFaze responds:

Thanks alot my friend! I really enjoyed reding your opinion, just keep in mind that this is not a finished song :P

[Solar Flare (Infinite Realms)]

I like the sort of pent-up, deep house-ish vibe you have at the beginning and how you slowly fade the more hard-hitting synths and leads in from there. I like the bass guitar-sounding synth and the piano. They mesh together well. I'm hearing a lot of synths that you use a lot. I don't know if they're just from the same plug-in or if they're exactly the same synths, but either way I'd like to see you mix up the sound design of your tracks much more in the future. One positive thing I will say, however, is that the mixing here is top-notch. Well done on that front! Like many of your tracks, I think this one was a bit longer than it needed to be, but it was still engaging throughout. The drop at 4:22 was awesome, although I wish you had built up to it a little more. It nearly came out of nowhere. Still, I like how you wound down the ending. It felt really conclusive by the last part with those final piano melodies. Overall, nice work! Keep at it, man. ;D

[Witches' Hut]

I love the oom-pah sort of vibe this has. Awesome melodies, progression, etc. as always. I suppose this is a little more minimalistic than a lot of your other work, and also lacks the structural intrigue of most of your recent stuff IMO, but I still applaud you for uploading content that you don't feel is your best work (which I have to work on myself, so it provides motivation). The rhythms and instruments are cool, though. This piece has a nice flow to it, and I liked the little flourishes you added at several different points (such as :49) to add phrasing and character. The mixing is great, as always. This is one of those tracks that I like more the more I listen to it. I think I'll download it. I download a TON of your tracks though...yeah, wait, I'll still download it. Keep up the good work, Johnfn! :D

johnfn responds:

"The mixing is great, as always"

Heck yeah, I mixed that one instrument SO WELL! :D

[I Love You All]

I like the blissful mood and melodies. The mixing is very solid too (as usual). I really like the heavy breaks at 1:16. It adds a new dimension of energy to the piece. I think the track was a bit longer than it needed to be, though. That said, your riser effects (e.x. 2:50) were cool, if a bit overused. The piece is well-structured and smooth-flowing. I also thought you could've done more with the drums, which were a bit bland and simplistic. The ending was also a bit abrupt. I think a tempo automation or something would've really helped you there. Still, overall solid work. It's nice to hear that 2015 has been such an important year for you, and good luck with your future music-making. ;)

[Final Frontier (Infinite Realms)]

I can tell that this is mastered really loudly and clearly right off the bat. It's climactic and cool. I thought that the transition at :20 could've been smoother. There wasn't a lot of lead-up to the addition of that snare. A crash or something would've gone a long way IMO. Still, I love how the harmonies really start creeping in by around the 1-minute mark, and it sounds pretty upbeat, yet simultaneously bass-heavy, which is cool. I found it a little difficult to pick out an emotional height and/or "arrival point" amidst the various textural ups and downs you have here. Still, the piano solo at 2:45 was cool, and I liked the distorted guitar sounds you had at around the 3-minute mark. I also feel that the balance was off occasionally. For example, at 3:40 the bass sort of overwrites the melody. The coda was cool, although the ending itself seemed a bit abrupt. I would recommend adding a sweep or something there, just to make it feel a bit more climactic. Overall, this is pretty solid. Not your best track IMO, but the melodies, instruments, and harmonies are all catchy and cool (as always). Keep it up, DM! ;D

Dylnmatrix responds:

Off the bat, I'm going to agree with you that this is not my best track, by a long shot. This was more an experimental track with everything to be honest. This track was actually one of my hardest to write as I really had no idea what to do with the track half the time. It was also the hardest to master, dear god.

I agree that it's actually really hard to pick our an emotional "height" so to speak. When I said I added a touch of feels, I just meant that the melody and harmony at the 3 minute mark is a fairly emotional melody compared to the first half.

I do have to disagree with you on one thing though. At 3:40, the bass is actually supposed to overwrite the melody for the "electro" drop. The melody is actually only added because the drop sounded so empty with just the single bass playing and is only there for support until the solo comes in. And on the ending, it felt better to me personally to end abruptly. The song is called Final Frontier, and there's actually a (sort-of) short story to the whole album that I could share with you if you wish through PM that (kind of) explains the abrupt ending.

All in all though, thanks for the review. I do actually agree with you on the majority of the track, and I do agree on the parts I countered with too, I just had reasonings to do those. This really, really is not my best track, and it's my least favorite off of the album, but I did have fun writing it and it really helped pave the way to Solar Flare actually existing.

[Metroid Prime Title Theme (Drumstep Remix)]

I think the mixing is solid and the sound design is cool. It was quite slow to progress, though. It's even-textured and climactic into 1:34. I thought you could've done a bit more with the drop. It was hard-hitting, but slow-paced in a way. You also drag the melodic section after the drop on for a bit too long IMO. I enjoyed the glitchy content you started incorporating at around 3:50, though. You could've added a lot more during that second drop, especially as a means of creating some more development. I also thought the repetition at 5:27 was unnecessary, and the fade-out came across as lazy and anti-climactic. I know it's really tough to continue to live up to the standard you set coming off of the contest victory (this goes for just about anyway, btw - not just you), so that's why I want to continue to push you. If you're going to be one of the truly great artists to come out of this site, your work is not done yet. Winning the NGAUC was a good start, and I congratulate you again. And don't get me wrong - this is a good track. I'm just being tough on you because I want to see you continue to improve. Best of luck, man! ;D

trunotfals responds:

AWWWWW well thank you so much for the feedback. i actuallyt started working on this song BEFORE the contest, then just went back to it and mastered it rather than re writing it. Infact, i lovet hat you feel the desire to push me, I like that motivation!!!! maybe ill just re do this!