Pretty catchy, and I like the mood and dynamic contrast, but some of the instruments were way too penetrating, like at :23. However, I like the rhythmic section at :39. It's pretty well-structured. I liked the transition at 1:53, too. Fade-out endings in general aren't that interesting, though, and this was no exception. It has potential, but I would say it needs a couple of new instruments. The structure of it also might function better if it were a full-length track with 1-2 breakdowns and more variation. Keep at it, though. Good start! ;)