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It's not a bad beat. The chord progression and melody were simple, but unique. I really wish it progressed a little faster, though. The structure is good, but some of your transitions, like at 1:59, could've been smoother. I like the mood and instruments, however. The melody got a little random and repetitive toward the end. Personally, I didn't really think the part from 2:34-3:33 really added much to the piece. I can tell you tried to add some variation here, but it came off as rather disparate from the main melody, and that didn't really work for me. Sorry. I think it has potential, though. It just needs more of a direction to go in, y'know? I think you should keep working on it, but not a bad start. ;)

Vasek responds:

Thanks for advices. I'm still learning rules of music and training my imgination, so who knows what will future bring? ^^

I like the instruments and melody, but it's very repetitive and lacks substance. It doesn't loop that well, and the transitions between the strings and music box, like at :15, are a little rough. I think you have a strong structure here- it just needs to be smoother, as well as a little more engaging. Couldn't hurt to vary it more, either. Pretty good start, though. ;)

Ritz190 responds:

Thanks. yea it was a test to see how well things meshed together. I don't plan on doing too much with it since it was just a test, but I see where you're coming from and I appreciate the criticism, dude!

It's really moody and interesting. I'm not sure I like the vocals, though. At times, it sounded a little too penetrating to fit with the smooth-sounding theme, like at :33. I also thought the parts didn't harmonize very well sometimes, and it sounds way too busy around 1:07. There are a lot of more interesting ways of ending a piece than a fade-out, btw. I still like the instruments, though, and I think it has potential. It just has two contrasting moods right now which don't fit well together- smooth and flowing, and rough and penetrating. You should keep working on it. It's worth it. ;)

Darkceo responds:

ty for the review, i will definitely will take all that into account for when im fixing this song!

I like the instruments at the beginning, and it's climactic, which is good. I like the transition at :52, as well as the melody after it. The mood and structure are really good. It's catchy and unique too, and I like the ending. It even makes a pretty good loop. Awesome job! ;)

Very calming. :) I like the instruments and mood, although I wish there was a bit more substance at some points. The transition at :59 was a little sudden, but I like how you made it sound like it was improvised (like a lot of jazz is) throughout. It has a nice, cheery little ending, too. ^^ I'd love to hear some of your original work. ;)

SilverPoyozo responds:

Thanks!Yep, it's lacking in a few areas, but I'm glad you liked it =)

I like the distorted harmonies at the beginning, but it started to get a bit too muddy-sounding for my tastes around :30. It's climactic, which is good, and, well, the dubstep bit- again, not really my style. The ending is a bit sudden, too, but it's interesting and unique to say the least.

Interesting and unique! :) Catchy, too! Well-structured, well-incorporated lyrics, awesome instruments. Maybe a little repetitive, and the ending was a little sudden, but I'd still love to hear some of your original work! Keep it up, man! ;D

Beautiful! :D I love the mood and instruments. The melody is uplifting, and it's very smooth and flowing. Well-structured, engaging, inspiring! Newgrounds needs more music like this! :D

DkayR responds:

Glad you enjoyed it.

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