I like the ominous beginning and instruments. I especially appreciated the percussion at 4:27. The drama and emotion is amazing throughout. Well-structured, good transitions, excellent dynamic contrast. A truly amazing composition! ;D
I like the ominous beginning and instruments. I especially appreciated the percussion at 4:27. The drama and emotion is amazing throughout. Well-structured, good transitions, excellent dynamic contrast. A truly amazing composition! ;D
I appreciate your kind words and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Keep on dreaming ;)
Well, I like the instruments and transitions, and you even have the beginning of a solid structure here, but I wish it was a little more varied and progressed a little faster. I agree that it's not that unique, but I think it definitely has the potential to be if you gave it a little more substance. It could even be a loop if you wrapped the remainder at the end (assuming you use FL Studio). I would suggest that you keep working on it, but it's a good start. ;)
I appreciate the attempt at emotion and all, but I don't think that piano instrument at the beginning really felt...powerful and full enough, y'know? However, I do like the pop-rock feel to it you incorporate in there after about 1:00. You also incorporated the Summer Set samples well. I thought some of your transitions could've been smoother, though, like at 2:00, 2:39, and 3:18. Btw, you probably already noticed, but that Summer Set sample cuts off a little early on "Love." ;) I liked the ending, and it definitely has potential. I just think it needs to flow more. Keep at it, JQiscool. ;)
Hmm. What should I do to make the piano powerful?
PM me.
Pop-rock is a fun genre for me to create, unfortunately I know very little about it.
My transitions have needed work since day 1 of my music making days.
I will work on it!
Thanks for reviewing!
I like the instruments. It's catchy and has this fresh sort of vibe. I wish the intro progressed a little faster, but I liked the transition at :46 and the melody at 1:05. The vocals didn't quite work for me, however, especially the more low-pitched ones. Overall solid groove, though. Keep at it, man. ;)
ah yes, I had a feeling that the robot vox wouldn't agree with everyone; I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the other bits though ;D next time I'll just have to do ALL the vocals myself ;]
I like the instruments and mood. It's really climactic, which is good. The melody is good too, and I like the part at :43. Good transitions, well-structured, an overall solid piece. Good job, man! ;)
Catchy, bass-y, awesome! I love the instruments, as well as the melody and transitions (ex: :51). It makes a pretty good loop, too, well-structured and all. Great job. ;)
Wasn't expecting a review so soon! I'm really glad you liked it! Makes me feel like I'm doing something right. Appreciate it, brother.
I like the instruments and beat, but it progresses a little slowly for my tastes in the beginning. At some points, it seems a little too busy, like at 1:04, and at others it lacks substance, like at 1:58. However, I do like the frantic synths and bass and the smooth transitions. It's not my favorite genre, but I recognize that it's a well-structured piece, and I like the ending too. Good job. ;)
thanks, glad you liked it, it's kinda like the first time i tried something more kinda mechanistic or kinda robotic like something like than
It's really catchy, and I like the effects and transitions like at :26. I do wish it was a little more varied, however. Are you planning on rapping over it? It ends a little suddenly too. Still, I liked the part at 2:08, and it's a solid beat. Keep it up, man! ;)
If someone feels like rapping why not!
Upbeat, cute, funky, and well-structured! I love the instruments and beat too. Transitions were rock solid, especially at 2:35, and I liked the ending as well. You did it again, Blackjack213! ^^
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