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It's so upbeat and cute! I love it! ^^ The melody is really happy and engaging. The whole thing is really catchy. The transition at 2:02 was a little sudden for me, however. I also think you use a lot of the same instruments in many of your songs. Maybe going forward you could try exploring other genres. Still, love your work, Blackjack213. It brightens my day! :D

Really interesting...I like the instruments and melodies. You incorporated the speech well, however in general I don't usually like spoken words used in excess in a song...but that's just me. I'm not sure how the speech relates to the "buttery epic popcorn" theme, but after :22 the song was pretty catchy and well-structured. Loops well too. Good job! ^^

mistarogerz responds:

The speech from Robert Frost just felt right at the time. However, in retrospect "What the Hell was I thinking when naming this thing Buttery Epic Popcorn?"

I love the cute instruments! The beat and the breakdown at :40 were really catchy. Nice job with the irony- dying young is so cute and happy! Really good remix. I'm looking forward to hearing some more of your original tracks. :D

I like the melody and the instruments. It has a pleasant sort of simplicity to it, with a nice videogame-ish feel, too. One suggestion I would make is to connect the instruments more. At :17, :34, and many other places in the song, there seems to be an accent on every note, which might have something to do with the instrument you used. It makes the piece feel a little choppy, which I don't think you were going for. Anyway, overall it's a nice piece, and I like the ending, too. Keep up the good work! ;)

Well, I like the intro and it's pretty catchy, but I feel like some of the instruments were pretty distorted and muddy, especially at :46. I like the climactic nature of it, and the rhythm and beat, for that matter, but some of those instruments sound more like sound effects to me, with the "whoosh" noises, especially at :46. I don't know if it's just not my style or what, but I feel like there should be more of a melody at :46 based on "melody-like" instruments. Other than that, it's a well-structured piece, and I like the ending. I encourage you to keep working on it. ;)

The beginning was pretty engaging, and I like that crash you have in there, but be careful to not overuse it. The trasition at 1:35 felt a little strange for me. I felt like you could connect the parts before and after it a little more. However, the part after that was really good. I don't think your melodies are boring. The way you ended the song was pretty sudden and strange, too, but my main problem with the song is that it almost feels like 2 different songs with the transiton at 1:35. Still, I think this piece has potential, and I encourage you to keep working on it. Keep up the good work! :)

I like the dreamy intro, but I think you made it too long, and the transition at 1:11 is a little sudden. I like the instruments, though, and the melody. It's upbeat and catchy. I like the ending, too. Overall, a nice feel-good sort of piece. Keep up the good work! :)

Zinitymusic responds:

Thank you! :-)

I had to think a lot about this one before reviewing it. It's dry and dull, yet interesting. It's mellow and relaxing, yet there's not a lot of depth in it. I like the instruments. I like the harmonies. I think it doesn't lead much of anywhere- there's the same level of intensity throughout the piece. Maybe you could try giving it more emotional/ dynamic contrast. It ends pretty suddenly. I think it needs a little more form. It's probably one of the most unique pieces I've ever reviewed on NG. It has potential. I encourage you to keep working on it. :)

Merpy responds:

Ok thank you
and yeah I'll keep working on it
i was trying to keep it simple
so i can spend more time on learning how to make instruments

Hi. I'm Andrew. Audio portal junkie since 2010, supporter since 2017. I always want to improve what I do! I make music, run the NGUAC, post poetry on BBS, and am the all-time #2 audio reviewer. I love this site, and I want to make it the best I can! ^_^

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