TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[She Rained Down]

I like the jazzy piano chords at the beginning and the acoustic kick drum. The rhythmic syncopations at :26 are great, as are the percussive instruments and the atmosphere. The vocals are nice and soothing, but could also use a boost in the mix and a bit of “decoration” - reverb, echo/delay effects, etc. The drums also get a tad buried in the mix at times, especially during the busier sections.

That said, the lyrics themselves are really haunting, and I absolutely love the solos at 1:34. The second refrain was great, especially with the chromatic progression at 2:45, and overall you hit this piece home really well. The production quality is easily my biggest concern here. The composition, sound design, and atmosphere are all fantastic. Keep it up, Glassedhouse! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.75/10

[Asteroid]

I like the dreamy synth riff and string pads at the beginning. The piece is a little slow to progress at first, but the crisp drums and added harmonies at around :40 are really nice. The oscillating pad that fades in at :38 sounds a bit too loud, and the way it was panned at :51 was a bit jarring tbh. The texture comes together well by 1:08, but the descending line the lead is playing still doesn’t seem very melodic or dynamic. I like the fat, grouchy synth bass and a lot of the other sound design elements. I also like the added harmonies during the second refrain at 2:35.

Overall, this piece is well-structured and smooth-flowing, with solid production quality and a killer atmosphere. Some of the compositional details could’ve been fleshed out a bit more, but honestly my biggest problem here is probably the extreme panning on that one pad - it’s just very distracting and unpleasant. Stereo widening is probably a better way of having an instrument like that blend in with the rest of the texture more - that’ll simultaneously pan the pads to both sides so that they sound more well-balanced. Otherwise, this is a catchy piece with a nice, soothing atmosphere. Keep at it, GlaceonDash! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.5/10

MauveDash responds:

This was made during a period when I discovered panning existed, so yeah!

I'll try my hardest the next time I make something similar, hopefully avoiding it sounding too harsh

[Sonic speed]

I like the bouncy beat at the beginning. The synths are a bit cheesy, though, and the mix sounds seriously distorted here. Notice how the drums sound a lot quieter at :32 than they did during the first 20 seconds? That’s a sign that the texture is getting distorted because you have multiple instruments playing at the same frequency range. You can fix it by adding a compressor to the drums, and then using an equalizer to filter out the bass tones (less than 200 Hertz or so) in the harmonic instruments (i.e., everything besides the bass and kick). I’m sure you can look up “how to use a compressor” or “how to use an equalizer” and then add the name of your DAW to help you navigate the technicalities of mixing in your specific program. You also might already be familiar with these mixing tools - you should use them way more often, is the point.

Production aside, I like the frantic arpeggios at :32, but I think the additional layering at :43 is a bit too much. I’m also enjoying the melodies at :53, although the transition at 1:15 came on a bit suddenly. After the breakdown at 1:15, the piece got pretty repetitive, and also has a pretty generic chord progression and arrangement. Overall, I think you have a good sense of rhythm, song structure, and harmony, but the composition needed more variety here and the mix could’ve been a lot tighter. Still, I enjoyed the house-inspired outro and the final build-up at 3:26. Keep at it, GEYXOR! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
6.75/10

GEYXOR responds:

tysm ill try to get better :D

[Miss You]

I like the gritty pads at the beginning. The chord progression is a bit strange, but I like the arpeggios and hip-hop inspired beats at :15. The bass and lo-fi kick at :30 are also nice sound design elements. The transition at :58 was really cool, but also didn’t really lead much of anywhere, since the harmonic content of this piece is rather repetitive after a while. The production quality and instrumentation are both definitely highlights for me, but the arrangement feels a tad disjointed after a while with all the stop-start transitions, and the composition feels pretty stagnant and directionless. Overall, I can tell you’re a talented producer, but I wanted to see more ebb and flow in the composition over time - dynamic melodies, or an atmospheric breakdown/bridge, or at least a key change or something. I’d encourage you to keep working on this track, though - it has a lot of potential. Keep at it, Geewd! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.5/10

[adonis]

I like the catchy beat at the beginning and the flashy 80s-style synths that come in shortly thereafter. The more melodic line at :35 is nice, although some of your sound design choices are a bit generic here, like the clap at :48. The mix could also be a bit tighter - I’d suggest getting stricter with the equalizers and maybe cutting back on some of the reverb. I like the filtering effects at the very end, though. My biggest issue with this piece is probably that the composition doesn’t feel very dynamic. The arrangement is a bit formulaic, with a shift every 4 or 8 bars, but not a lot of ebb and flow in between. It also would’ve been nice to see you shake up the harmonic framework at some point. All of that said, this piece is really catchy, smooth-flowing, and has some solid sound design as well. Keep at it, GDjkhp! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7/10

[ShadowFox - Wake Up!]

I like the piano riff at the beginning and gradual fade-in of the pads at :23. The gritty bass at :38 has a bit too much static and not enough tonal core for my tastes, but I’m enjoying the build-up into 1:18 nonetheless. The dreamy drop sounds good, if a tad minimal and over-compressed. The arrangement is a bit generic here, but the compositional details are still satisfying. I especially like the creative beats at 2:25 and the more energetic drop at 3:08. You did a good job of making the content during the drop feel fresh compared to the first one with the added harmonies and the faster-paced underlying rhythm. The spacey outro was also a nice touch. There might’ve been some more dynamic melodies at some point, but overall, I enjoyed the atmosphere, rhythmic content, and mixing and mastering in this piece a lot. Keep at it, ShadowFox! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10

gdfoxy0021 responds:

Thanks a lot for this comment, i appreciate it a lot ^^

[Bright Futures]

I like the dreamy atmosphere at the beginning and the gradual fade-in. The crisp beats and airy vocals at :30 are great, and I’m loving the relaxed and upbeat mood. The progression is a bit slow-paced at times, and I would’ve liked it to have a bigger “moment of arrival” at some point - climactic, melodious, etc. That said, I liked the breakdown with the piano riff. I’ll also add that the production here is rock-solid, with some very clear and well-balanced instruments throughout. Some more variety towards the end of the piece would’ve been welcome, as again, I feel like it’s missing something to hit it home and add an overarching sense of dynamism. Still, you’re clearly a talented producer with a knack for soothing atmospheres and neat vocal work. Keep at it, GalaxyTones! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8/10

[Bohemian Theme - Ash Wednesday]

I like the somewhat melancholy melody at the beginning and the groovy bass line at :17. The drums at :14 don’t quite sound like they’re playing on the beat, though. Or maybe there was a tempo automation in there that I missed? Either way, it’s something worth taking a second look at. The eerie riff at :33 is nice, and the bass line accompanies it well. The harmonies at around 1:08 are a bit dissonant, but only briefly. The solo at 1:18 does a nice job of hitting the piece home. Overall, I like a lot of the individual melodic ideas and progression of the different sections of the piece. The piece sounds a bit minimal throughout, though, and it might be a good idea to either add some additional harmonies or layer on some mixing effects (reverb, compression, etc.) to fill out the texture more. Still, you clearly have a good sense of rhythm, harmony, and progression, and you’ve earned a scout. Keep at it, GabeMalk! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.5/10

[Voltage Rush]

It’s a bit hard to follow the rhythm at the beginning 5 seconds or so, but I like the punchy synths and the crisp beats. Some of the drum samples are a bit generic, and the synths at :30 sound a bit harsh and indistinct in the mix. It also sounds like you have some reverb on the kick at :52, which could also be compromising the production quality a bit. You channel the energy really well here, with a number of cool transitions and fun compositional details like the glitches at around 1:10. The harmonic content gets a bit repetitive after a while here, and at some point some more melodic content would’ve been nice. The structure seems a bit formulaic after a while, despite the cool transitions - you seem to switch up the texture every 8 or 16 bars or so, but don’t do much to create variety within the phrase. Despite that missed opportunity, I’m enjoying the apprehensive mood and sound design overall here. You clearly have a great sense of rhythm, progression, and harmony. The composition just could’ve been a bit bolder and more variational. Still, the catchy synth riffs and high-octane breaks are really neat. Keep at it, g2961! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7/10

G2961 responds:

Thanks for advanced review! I accept it!

[Grove of Fragile Dreams and Towering Nightmares]

I like the emotional appeal of the piano at the beginning. The melodies at :09 are nice, but I think you overused the little rolled chords at the beginning of each phrase (:09-:14, :18-:25, etc.). The transition into :52 was smooth, although some of the instruments there sound pretty inauthentic. The piano could’ve sounded a bit more distinct in the mix, but otherwise the production quality holds up well during the climax of the piece. The post-chorus at 1:40 has a nice, punchy rhythm to contrast with the flute lead. Overall, this is a really impressive composition. I honestly think my biggest problem with it is the quality of the instruments - clearly fake, and occasionally a bit harsh-sounding in the treble range (i.e., 1:36). You should probably look into getting some better orchestral samples, but your sense of melody, progression, and rhythm certainly make up for that here. Consider yourself scouted. Keep at it, FUZZYFREAK! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.5/10

FUZZYFREAK responds:

hey man, thank you so much for providing such a detailed response to my piece! i really really appreciate you taking so much time and care into listening and analyzing something i've made so closely, even if it's something you presumably take great pleasure in doing :)

before i explain some stuff i must say i 100% agree with basically everything you've said here. the elephant in the room i wanna address is that this piece was made in flat.io, a browser hosted notation based software (think musescore, sibelius etc. but exclusively hosted on your browser instead), which is why some of the instruments sound very inauthentic in the mix as well as the mix itself not being expertly handled (there are 0 mixing options provided besides being able to pan and give reverb to instruments as well as a hard-cap limiter put in place when exporting to mp3 or wav to prevent clipping, but anything else is completely out of the picture hahaha)

as for the rolls in the beginning, i thought of them less as chords and more just the main melody being played by the right hand in a unique way - the melody itself is just doubled an octave higher, so what the roll is effectively doing is just making it so the octaves aren't playing at the same time (something you've probably noticed is that at places like :40 for example i didn't use this roll to accent that specific beat/note for effect, since overall i think the roll makes the melody more "floaty"). all that is to say i don't think you're necessarily wrong, just that there's a difference in artistic vision, which i still honestly super appreciate you mentioning to me as it gives me something to think about


once again, thank you for the review! and dw i'll definitely be applying for the other contest, just wanted to see the results of this one first ;)

p.s. forgot to mention but i've moved to making music in FL since i've made this piece so don't worry about that LOL