Love the rich pads at the beginning and the frantic drum riff that comes in shortly thereafter. The mix is really tight and full, but also not too loud. The lyrics are evocative and creative, although I'm not sure I liked how artificial and robotic you made the vocals sound post-production. The more mellow section between the first chorus and the second verse is a nice "break in the action," and the dreamy outro with the bell-like synths is also really good. At times, I wanted the bass to come through in the mix just a tad more, but otherwise this piece has it all - energetic/atmospheric/melodic sections, really neat transitions, emotional appeal, danceability, strong production quality, and killer sound design. Keep it up, Lance! ^_^