Ooohh, didn't even realize this was a re-master of the track I just reviewed lol. I like how you carry the arpeggios throughout the intro with distinct notes a little more in this version. The rhythmic density at 1:20 is great, and flows much better into the eerie breakdown at 1:30. The spacey texture at 2:44 functions much better as a bridge than an outro. I like the echo-y guitars at 3:05 and the change-of-pace during the middle section here. The transition back into the more edgy and energetic section at 3:45 was also really nice. I also like how you integrated the dreamy guitars with the drums at 4:10.
At 4:30, the mix sounds a bit strained, but otherwise I didn't notice any major problems with it. I've never been a huge stickler for mixing, though. If you want more specific advice, I'd suggest reaching out to @midimachine or @ADR3-N. Feel free to tell them I sent you. :D
The arrangement still sounds a bit choppy, but you've squeezed a LOT of ideas into one piece. Some more gradual pacing and some consolidation of those ideas might help. But at the same time, I love the atmospheric details and variety in this piece. So glad you're back, Trunotfals! Keep up the good work. ^_^