I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the rich atmosphere. The vocals and piano arpeggios work well, although the chord progression was a tad cliche. Once the texture gets a bit denser at 1:10 or so, the piece really starts coming together for me. The crisp rimshots and guitars give the piece a nice edge that it was missing earlier, and the rhythmic content gets richer too. I think the melodic content could've been a tad more dynamic, as otherwise the modulations seem to be one of the principal sources of variety later in the piece. The tranquil outro was a good choice, though, and I'm continuing to enjoy that percussion groove until the very end. Strong work, guys! ^^