TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Azure Rei - Mind Slayer (Final)]

I like the punchy drums and suspenseful mood. The progression is pretty slow, especially for a relatively short piece, and at some point I would’ve liked to hear some more melodic content. The transition at 1:12 could’ve been smoother - maybe it would’ve helped if it was more gradual. The mixing and mastering is strong here - loud, clear, distinct, well-balanced. This piece has a lot of fun details, like the drum fill at 1:52 and the ghostly high-pitched synth at 2:02. My main complaint is just that the composition needs more structural variety and shape. The piece has a cool mood and sound design, but it doesn’t have a strong sense of directionality for most of the piece. I’d suggest doing more with dynamics and phrasing, and also going in a different harmonic direction with the piece at some point. Breakdowns, bridges, and solos can really help create some much-needed variety in your piece. Stripping the drums away and making room for some melodic content would be a great place to start. Overall, nice job with the instrumentation, atmosphere, and rhythmic elements. The underwhelming composition just needs some work. Keep at it, Axel7!

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.25/10

Axel7 responds:

Wow, thank you for your feedback! that's really helpful :D

[The Elvenking’s Prayer]

I love the bassy intro and ambiance. The Middle Eastern flavor is really cool, and the dissonant layering at 1:16 really considerably to the texture. I love the lyrics, too. Your description of "haunting" fits this piece in many respects. The drone-like quality of the piece limits the ebb and flow of the composition, but you did a good job of incorporating melodic content between the vocal phrases that filled in the texture. Nice job with the production, too. What exactly is the language you're using, btw? Google Translate tells me it's Kurdish, but I don't trust Google Translate. XD Anyway, keep up the great work and good luck in the ADM!

etherealwinds responds:

Thanks for your review TL! It's in Sindarin, a language created by Tolkien used in the world of Lord of the Rings. :)

[Saruz - Violin Master]

Hey man. I'm not judging your group, but I've heard this track is pretty stellar from the other judges. I was not disappointed. The violin is beautiful, and you integrate so well with the heavy breaks. The piece is well-structured and smooth-flowing, and has a great amount of structural variety, too. The frantic solo at 2:03 was probably my favorite part of the piece. This track has a ton of melodic content and dynamic contrast, and overall the production, sound design, and composition are all very strong. You talk about how you're unsatisfied with the quiet mix, but I think that's a negligible detail in the context of such amazing musicianship. The only thing that's really worth complaining about imo is the abrupt ending. You really sold the drama with this piece. Keep up the great work!

Saruz responds:

wow, thank you for all of these nice words! I personally didn't expect that this thing will get such attention, although this is definitely the best one I have ever created. and well, I think there are many more revelant technical details to work at though, 'cause I always compare my work to reference tracks and it doesn't sound fully satisfying yet. But I have big bunch of time to achieve this, actually this is only the second year of my music production. thanks once again!

[Origins]

Catchy piece. The drum samples at the beginning sound a little generic, but I'm really loving melodic content at :17. The climax into :44 is great, and the refrain there is really cathartic. The panning is a bit heavy at times, but the production quality is really clean overall. Well-structured and smooth-flowing content too. I appreciated the structural variety offered by the breakdown in the middle, and the climax into the second refrain was well-done. I wish you had varied the melody a tad more the second time around, and the ending is a tad abrupt. Otherwise, not much to complain about here. I can totally tell you were influenced by EnV, too! Keep up the good work, Sylux03, and gl in the ADM! ^_^

Sylux03 responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH! OMG <3

[Frigice (Topaz Version)]

Good to hear from you, TV! I like the groovy dance pads and automations/filtering into :30. Smooth flow and progression. The hi-hats at the 1-minute mark or so are really quiet. Nice sense of climax into 1:30. The melodic content there was quite enjoyable. Kick could've been a little stronger there. Overall, the mix is really loud and pretty well-balanced. I think the pads are taking up a bit too much room after a while. Overall, it's a really catchy track with some cool sound design. Might function better as a longer piece with a couple of verse/refrain cycles. Looking forward to hearing the rest of the stuff from the album! ^_^

TeraVex responds:

Thanks man! Always look forward to your reviews!

[Chords Dance]

I like the smooth strings at the beginning and the bright mood that becomes more prominent at :17 or so. Instrumentation is lovely, if a bit inauthentic. The hurried swell at :52 works really well to channel the energy, even if the harmonies around there (:53-1:01 or so) sound a bit clashing. The panning was a little strong for my tastes; I think the mix emphasized clarity a lot more than blending. The composition has a lot of ebb and flow to it, and the final emotional height (3:10) ties the piece together really well. Beautiful work overall. Good luck in the ADM! ^_^

AzulJazz responds:

Thx so much TaintedLogic

[breaking glass]

I love the pensive mood at the beginning. Sounds vaguely apprehensive, too. Nice job with the emotional strings at :27. Despite the convincingly organic texture, the electronic elements that start fading in at around :48 don't feel out-of-place. The sense of climax over the course of the first half of the piece is really strong. Atmosphere of the piece is really good, and the punchy bass at the ends of phrases has a nice, dark inevitability to it. Some of the more dynamic-sounding riffs (like at 2:15) are quite welcome in the texture, but I guess my main complaint is that you could've done a tad more to thicken the harmonic depth of the piece at its climax. I'm not always a fan of the compositional elements of your tracks, Sequenced, but you did a great job here of providing some shape and dynamic contrast. Keep up the good work and gl in the ADM!

Sequenced responds:

oof.

[Black Clad Warriors]

I like the guitar riffs at the beginning. Has a calming vibe, yet at the same time an edginess that grows on the piece with time. By the 1-minute mark, I'm really getting more of the intensity. I thought 1:12 was pretty much a non-transition that needed a bit more smoothing. Interesting how you bring in the more processed-sounding drums at 1:35. Like all your tracks, the piece has an underlying flow with a lot of changes in energy creating variety. The production quality is solid. It seems like you often introduce and remove instruments from the texture without warning, which can feel jarring at times. That might be something to work on. Otherwise, it's an enjoyable piece with quite a lot of shape. Keep up the good work, I0ta!

zybor responds:

shit i forgot you reviewed this one. :O im so sorry

thanks

[Lightyears from Home]

I like the emotion at the beginning and the pacing. I really enjoyed the string swells once they started coming in. The phrasing throughout is gorgeous. This is the right kind of simplicity in music, my friend. There's a ton of variety - you really told a story with this one, even if you compromised a bit on the cohesiveness of the piece as a result. The melody at 2:15 is probably my favorite part of the piece. It's just absolutely haunting. I was also glad to hear such a climactic section at 3:10 as well. You've really capitalized on the emotional quality of the piece with the dynamic range of the piece.

"Hope I didn't butcher it too much with my horrible piano performance!" --> Nonsense! Don't be so humble, Dan. This is incredible work! Looking forward to hearing more from you soon. :)

Danman87 responds:

Thanks so much for the in depth review! I actually needed multiple attempts to properly get the piano parts right, which is why I don't consider it much of a good performance. Super happy you liked it though, this one was a lot of fun to do! :)