I liked the mysterious mood at the beginning, as well as the melodies at :09. It had a majestic vibe to it, that somehow shared a more apprehensive and eerie feel at times. You have a very interesting progression here, and by the time I hear the melodies at :58, I think you've really created a solidly structured and smooth-flowing piece. I also enjoyed the full texture of the piece. The drone-like pad that comes in at 2:05 sort of gets distorted by the other instruments a bit. I'd check to make sure you've Equalized everything as well as you can. Compositionally, though, this is a really strong piece. I think the ending is very conclusive, and you may not have even needed the last few notes from that bell-like sound at 3:17. Overall, great work! Keep it up, HellboundDochi! ;)