TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inside-Out]

I like the harmonies and instruments at the beginning. It definitely is climactic and catchy, and I'm glad you're starting to aim toward more of a full-sounding mix. However, it's that very same full-sounding mix that has revealed a few weaknesses in the mastering, I'm afraid. Do you hear how the clap at :46 is getting a little distorted? That means you need to use the Equalizer to get rid of tones that are interfering with other instruments.

Here's how to do that: in each mixer tab (that is, for each instrument you have), click on the arrow next to the box that says "1," on the right-hand side of the mixer window. Then scroll down to "Parametric EQ 2." Try dragging the knobs below 200 Hz (there's a scale at the bottom of the EQ window) all the way down to zero for EVERY instrument EXCEPT the bass and kick.

Also, you almost never need limiters or compressors on the master channel. Lowering the volume levels and adjusting the EQ is a more effective way of making sure it doesn't sound too harsh. I'm sorry if you know this already, but I think you should think even more about how you equalize your instruments, especially since you have so many different bass instruments in there.

Anyway, I like the breakdown you had around 1:50 and how that climaxed back into the part at 2:22. Another highlight was 2:55. I think your sense of harmony has developed a lot in the past few months or so. I also enjoyed the part at 3:26. Nice job with creating a lot of structural variety in this piece. Personally, I don't even think you needed the last 10 or 15 seconds. Still, overall nice work. Mixing is tough, but I think it'll really make the difference in taking your music to the next level, TeraVex. Believe me: I still need to work a lot on my mixing myself. Haha, keep at it, man! ;D

TeraVex responds:

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind for my next song!
Mastering is tough, but you being consistent in telling me has helped improve my music greatly!

[Abrakazam]

Oooo...I like the ominous mood. It has an almost exotic dance-like theme to it. I could just picture two Spanish dancers, one with a rose in his mouth, being the entertainment in a smoky joint in an old-fashioned movie. 0_O I think that, like a lot of your pieces, it has an excellent sense of flow and progression but is perhaps a little bit all-over-the-place. It almost seems like you combined 10-15 different riffs you made for a song and connected them all with stop-and-start transitions. It sounds rather improvised, although you do maintain the mood and atmosphere throughout. I love all the intricate details of this piece, though, such as the complex rhythm at 3:23. It ends a little suddenly. I think you should be careful in the future about adding some more repetition to keep the listener grounded, but I understand that you made this a number of years ago. Anyway, I continue to be extremely impressed with your ability to play the piano. Good work, LSD! :D

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

Dance like ey? I kinda get where you're coming from!
Lol! I like the image you've painted XD

This is most certainly all over the place. As I just responded to Luncay Echo, I didn't really care about making this piece sense making; I just experimented in a lot of ways, until I was done. I understand that this gives the piece a sense of being improvised :D

Hmm. I can't find what's that special about 3:23 in particular, as that's the same rhythm I used in 0:28, 0,44, and 3:00. Although the parts may sound similar, there's actually different chords and melodies in all of those places :3

This piece does indeed end suddenly. I didn't want it to ever lose its momentum, but to end when it was at the very top XD Just weird experiments and such...

I have to disagree a bit about the repetition. I feel as repetition is a tool which may or may not be used. There's no need to use every tool in every piece. Repetition is a thing which you can do well without, but which is not so good when used too much. Repetition also exists in different forms! Example: Notice how 1:43-1:55 is actually a shadow of 1:33-1:41; though the chords and melodies are different, they clearly relate to each other (I don't know the musical term...).
Apart from that, 2:15 is clearly a variation of the beginning of the piece.
Also, the same chords are used in these four separate parts, with similar melodies: 0:20-0:28, 0,36-044, 2:51-2:59, and 3:13-3:20 XD
I understand your point though, as my piano music generally lacks that much general repetiotion, at least most of the time. I like flowing pieces. I do know how to repeat stuff though (like in the Last Dance). Much of the time, repetition can just be hard to notice in my songs I guess, but there is a lot in almost all of them. I just change something in each repetition, so it's never exactly the same! That is, the arrangement at the very least is not the same :3

Thanks a great deal for being so active at reviewing and listening!!!
:DDDDDD

[The Ocean]

I think it's pretty, but I'm not sure I like the samples you used. Also, the way the notes cut off around :09 sort of disrupted the smoothness of this piece IMO. I like how you tried to create some dynamic contrast at :14, although you may have needed a crash or something to transition into that part. I like the melodies, and the progression isn't that bad, but I think you need some drums and more structuring in order to make this piece more interesting. Also, it doesn't really loop that well IMO. Sorry this is such a negative review, but I like these harmonies and I think you could've done a LOT more with this piece. For example, :46 seems like it should be a climax, so maybe you should add some more pads there and some drums and really turn it into a cinematic one! Little things like that can really bring out the emotion in pieces like this. I'd love to see this made into a full-length track with more structural variation. Keep at it, man! ;D

CGA-999 responds:

I don't mind negative reviews, unless they don't give me good feedback. I love that you were honest and didn't just say you liked it. Thank you so much for the review!

[From A Fear Of Falling]

Ooooo...I love the chill vibes at the beginning. I think that synth that starts to fade in at around :20 doesn't really compliment that mood too well, especially with its intricate rhythm. I really enjoyed the synth at :55, though. I think the vocals added a lot to the piece, but maybe you should've added some more reverb to them just so they would've come out a little more. I love the melodies, and the beat is pretty cool, although I'm not sure I liked the clap sample you used. Another thing you might want to work on is adding some dynamic contrast, just to create some more structural variety. Toward the last minute or so, it does have a good sense of climax. Throughout most of the piece, the snare sort of sounded like it was quiet for a couple beats, and then soft for the next couple, which bothered me a bit. I'm not sure if that's because of the mixing or if it was intentional, but I don't think it works well in this instance. Speaking of the snare, I don't think you should've kept it in the outro at 3:25. It sort of adds a sense of energy and urgency that doesn't really fit with the chill pads and melodies you have going on in the background. I love the instruments you used for the synths, though. Overall good work! :D

adieuwinter responds:

Thanks! I'll work on the points you've made.

[Taken By The Shadow]

I liked how you combined the orchestral and heavy rock sounds. I'm not sure I liked your piano sample, though. It sounded sort of hollow and unnatural for some reason. The vocals are cool - they have sort of a tribal chant-like vibe to them, although they're so distorted that it's very hard to tell what you're saying. The flute solo in the middle also added a lot to the piece IMO. I also enjoyed the melodies around 2:35. This song is well-structured and smooth-flowing, and I liked how you set up the piece stylistically too. Overall, solid work! ;D

JytteHimself responds:

Thx man!

[Top of the World]

I like the instrumentation a lot, but I think you should've brought out the melodies/argeggios a bit more. That bass that keeps pulsing in and out gets in the way a bit IMO. Smooth loop, though. I like the sound effects and moods. Keep it up! ;)

ADR3-N responds:

Yeah, had some issues with the bass literally taking over -- was considering a fretless bass synth instead; I'll keep that in mind. Glad you liked it though!

[a summer memory]

I love the emotion and the jazzy chords. I didn't like how that one chord cut off at :27 like that...kind of ruined the flow. It was only momentary, though, because this is a beautiful piece. You cover a wide range of octaves and moods, which I liked. My favorite part is probably at 3:28. It's just haunting beauty, and the silence before that part helps. Very well-built structurally, and I love the simplicity of this piece - it gives it quite the human touch IMO. Sure, it is a bit "reserved" if you know what I mean, but I can definitely understand why you're more tempted to play more carefully when recording. Besides, it's not like I haven't been recording all of the improvs you do with that bug I have in your room. >:D This piece has a great sense of melodic development, structural relief (with the part at 3:28), and an excellent sense of progression. Also, I'm not really sure what pedal points are, but I plan on earning some when I can take out my bike once all this snow melts in 4 months or so...XD Keep up the great work, Johnfn! ^^

johnfn responds:

Pedal points are what you score if you pedal fast enough, silly! Actually, they're the point at which you release the pedal when playing, which cuts off all the sustaining notes.

> 3:28

Duh who doesn't like recapitulations of the main theme in a higher octave? It's pretty much the oldest trick in the book :D I was thinking this song could have a little more dynamic variation though, it's kind of all the same loudness up until that point...

thanks for the review!

[Swift Roe Deer]

It's pretty! I think one thing that could really spice up this piece is some rhythmic variation, though, especially during the first minute or so. It's all quarter and eighth notes, which is fine, but throwing in some more offbeat content, especially during the less engaging and energetic bit at the beginning, would help this piece, I think. After that, it had a very beautiful, uplifting, and full sound, and I loved how you brought it full circle with the piano at the end. Nice use of percussion, and your string samples are rather good. It's a very smooth-flowing and well-structured piece overall. Nice job! ;)

MrNightVarga responds:

Thank you mate, your review was more than helpful and I will definitely keep that in mind next time around. =)

[Hinterland]

I continue to be impressed by your work, man. Beautiful piano throughout. It really creates a lot of space for climax, but I think you could've done a bit more with that. I understand this was made for a short film or something, but as a stand-alone piece, it might need some sort of dynamic contrast and melodic development in order to be structurally complete IMO. Still, this has a beautiful ambient vibe to it which I love. Keep it up, dude! ;)

erlendflatin responds:

Thanks buddy :) This was composed as a sort of aesthetic study, as well as experimentation with modal textures, which is why the melodic development seem to be floating a little back and forth ;) But thanks for the reviews, it is always nice to hear some positive words about ones music!

[Reionizing - UAO]

I like the effects at the beginning. Really quirky vibe you got going on here...sounds like aliens are invading, and they spend an irrational time analyzing the internal content of lawn grass or something. XD It could've progressed faster IMO, but I think this would be perfect for some sort of dark, futuristic videogame. I love all the percussive effects and the chill pads. My main complaint is the ending. It's really sudden and inconclusive. Given that this is an ambient track and would probably work well in a videogame, you could've at least made it loop. You also could've added some pulsing Ping-Pong effect at the end and had it gradually fade out. That always works well in these kinds of tracks. ;) Otherwise, I love it! Really interesting and unique work here, man. Keep it up! ^^

SoLoR1 responds:

Thank you for your constructive comment!! Will have to make some new edits, I honestly wanna make this a lot longer, had such a good time producing it!!