I like the instruments and the mood. The transition at :23 was way too sudden, though. How you distort those instruments is really cool, however. The effect at :49 seemed really random and out of place. You seem to struggle with transitions. Might I recommend using builds/sweeps/crashes? Other than that it's pretty good. I would've liked to see some more variation, but it does loop pretty well and is pretty catchy and all. Keep at it, man! ;)