I like the refreshing guitar riffs at the beginning and the crisp drums. Your voice is really nice, but I think the vocals could use a little more boost in the mix, and towards the beginning they also sound a tad dry production-wise. Later on, the layering of the different lines help resolve this issue, though, and I especially like the harmonies at 2:16 - sounds like a barber shop quartet. :D The lyrics themselves are pretty heavy, but the vocals have a great flow to them that really forces you to follow the action, and the rhythmic component of the vocal lines adds some extra tension, almost like the narrator is sobbing in between saying the words. The instrumental track isn't quite as dynamic as I might've liked to see. A guitar solo before the final refrain would've really hit the spot. I also think the ending comes on pretty suddenly, but then again so does a car crash. Overall, you really told a story with this one, man! Major props for the passionate vocals, sound design, and flow here. ^_^