I like the murky, dramatic flair at the beginning and the staccato-y vocals at :15 or so. There might be a tad too much reverb in the texture, as during the busier sections the percussion doesn't sound super distinct in the mix, but it certainly helps fill the gaps during the thinner sections. The energy and drive that the piece had towards the beginning dies off a bit by the end, but I like the mysterious horn riff at the end. Makes me think that the enemy got away, but the battle is far from over. Compelling work! Keep at it, Possibly. :)