I like the dark ambiance at the beginning and the breathy vocals within the first 10 seconds. It has a nice and foreboding cinematic vibe. The mix is really loud and crisp, and the synth riff at 1:04 is really catchy. The piece could use a bit more melodic content and variety, and the end came on a little too suddenly, but overall you nailed the production quality, sound design, atmosphere, and rhythmic content. Keep up the good work, man! ^^