TaintedLogic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Untitled - Continued]

I like the beat and the vocals. It's a little repetitive considering it's only 80 seconds long. I like what you did with the beat at 1:07, though. I feel like it needs more structure to be complete, but it does loop well. You should keep working on it, but this is a good start. ;)

K-POW responds:

thanks for the kind review!

I'm actually currently working on all the things you mentioned, just keep updated cause next release should be the full version :)

[Hi Mark.]

It's really relaxed and emotional and simple. I like it a lot. Was this improvised? It's short and it doesn't have a lot of substance, but it also leads somewhere and is very well-structured. It could even loop if you wanted it to. Great work, STEPHEN4705! ;D

STEPHEN4705 responds:

It was indeed improvised. It was based off the work of a fellow Newgroundser by the name of MarkySpark. He's got some fantastic work and if you liked this I strongly reccomend you check his work out as it's far superior to this :P Thanks for your time :D

[Twenty-Three]

I like the instruments and mood, but it's a little simple and dull. It needs more energy or substance. It's gets really repetitive after a while, and the effects you sneak in there starting around :45 don't really add much to it. It needs to lead somewhere more, although I like how it ends similarly to how it begins, even if it doesn't really loop that well. Sorry. I've been tough on you. It has potential; it just should be a little more engaging and varied in my opinion. Keep working on it, man. ;)

[The Psychedelic Railway]

The first thirty seconds were interesting, engaging, and climactic. I like the instruments and melody. I expected it to be a little more creepy, but I found the melody strangely upbeat. It's a little repetitive at times, and I feel you could do more with it, but it's well-structured and catchy. I like the transition at 3:04, and the ending was interesting. Good job! ;)

[Wild Fears]

I like the creepy melody and effects. It's a little repetitive and the variation that's there is very gradual. I feel like there should've been more substance at some points in the track, but I like the climax which peaks at 1:57. It's catchy and I like the instruments. 2:38 was an interesting transition. I liked the ending. I'd say you should work on varying it more as a priority, but, overall, I liked it. Keep it up, man! ;)

Abombination responds:

Thank you! I thought I could add a little more repetition to this one. Most of my tracks dont normally have this much repetition.

[Nights]

It's simple and cute. :3 I like the idea behind the song, but it lacks substance, and the melody was a little dry and bare. Maybe you could try harmonizing with some strings or something. I think it needs to be more engaging and lead somewhere more...you should keep building on it. It has potential. ;)

Woolio1 responds:

Surely, any sooner or later, I will try my best for learning how to play whit music boxes (On a good side) But for now, thanks for the review.

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Oh, just forgot, this was actually made 2years ago but my cousin recorded it (He though it was good), so i completely forgot how to use them correctly, but even then, ill attempt to learn again at my best!

[Chances (WIP)]

I like the funky beat at the beginning and the climax starting at :15, even if it was a little too gradual for my tastes. It's catchy and even dreamy at some points. I like the melody and instruments. Sometimes, it lacks a lot of substance, but that's okay, at least at :15. I like your breaks and transitions. It's well-structured, although the ending could've been more...conclusive. It's a great start. Nice job. ;)

[Lone X - New Truth]

I was instantly engaged. The beginning has a mood to it- suspense, apprehension, something- that's just engrossing. I love the strings and piano and the drama and emotion! It has so much feeling- I wish you went more of somewhere with it, though. It seemed a little repetitive at points. I liked the breakdown at 2:32, and it finally started to have an interesting form at 2:44. It's engaging throughout, and I love the ending. Definitely a great song to open an album with! Great job! The feeling of impending doom makes me thirsty for more! :D

Lone-X responds:

I appreciate the review! I love the feedback! Glad you liked it!

Peace and love
Lone X

[Conquest Of Paradise RMX]

I loved the instrument you used for the melody and the variations with that bass-y instrument (like at :58, 1:07, etc.). Maybe a little repetitive, but it's well-structured and upbeat! ^^ I liked the ending, but I think you overused that crash a little bit starting around 3:07. Overall, great work! You were one on NG's break-out artists of 2012, and still going strong! Keep it up, man! :D

TastyTeo responds:

The beat was 3/4 and not 4/4 so i had to end it the 3/4 way :P it is correct but it is not that good for the ear if you know what i mean, anyway thanks for the review :D