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It's pretty catchy, but a little repetitive. Progressive house isn't my favorite genre, but I like the beat and instruments. The bassline was a little cliche, and it definitely needs more variation for my tastes, but it's well-structured and smooth-flowing. I liked the ending, though. Overall, it's pretty good. It just needs more variety/originality. ;)

I like the dreamy mood, although it progresses really slowly compared to your other tracks. I like the instruments, but I think it needs a little more variety. At some points, like at :48 and 2:04, it really didn't seem to have that much substance. I like the harmonies and bass, and it's a nice little ambient groove, but it could be more engaging in my opinion. I didn't think it needed to be 6 minutes long. Still, it's a smooth background sort of piece. I like it. :)

TastyTeo responds:

i wanted to make it as long as i could because the school project is kind of big

I liked the piano at the beginning, but I think you need a smoother transition at :15. The beat was good. It's nice and climactic, although that synth at :46 was a little too penetrating for me. I like the variations you have starting around 1:23. I must say, however, I feel like I've heard the same bassline a thousand times. Sorry. It ends a little suddenly, too. Maybe you could create a transition at 1:59 so that it can loop smoothly (?). I think you should keep working on it- try to make it more unique and smooth. It has potential. ;)

I like the percussion and mood. It's catchy and the melody is nice and cute! :3 It loops really well, and I like the structure you have going on here. Keep it up, man! ;)

ScrabbitTheRabbit responds:

Thanks for the kind words :]

I like the emotion and simplicity. The instruments were beautiful! I think it should have a little more structure to it, though, and I didn't the pauses really added much to the piece, especially towards the end. It's a little too slow in that regard. I love the mood and instruments, but I think you should give it a little more form. You should keep working on it. :)

Mattashi responds:

Thanks for your review :) , I'll see and try if I can make it better.

I like the ominous beginning and how it evolves into an upbeat one. It progresses a little slowly for my tastes, and the transition at 1:01 was a little sudden, but it's catchy and I like the instruments. I think you should work on varying it more. It just got a little repetitive. Even so, I like what you did at 2:32 with those chords, and the part leading into the part at 3:16 is very climactic, which is good, even though the transition at 3:16 itself could've been smoother. It's not my favorite style of music, but I liked the structure. I like how you went back to that ominous mood at the end. ;) Keep it up, man! :)

I like the beat and the vocals. It's a little repetitive considering it's only 80 seconds long. I like what you did with the beat at 1:07, though. I feel like it needs more structure to be complete, but it does loop well. You should keep working on it, but this is a good start. ;)

K-POW responds:

thanks for the kind review!

I'm actually currently working on all the things you mentioned, just keep updated cause next release should be the full version :)

It's really relaxed and emotional and simple. I like it a lot. Was this improvised? It's short and it doesn't have a lot of substance, but it also leads somewhere and is very well-structured. It could even loop if you wanted it to. Great work, STEPHEN4705! ;D

STEPHEN4705 responds:

It was indeed improvised. It was based off the work of a fellow Newgroundser by the name of MarkySpark. He's got some fantastic work and if you liked this I strongly reccomend you check his work out as it's far superior to this :P Thanks for your time :D

I like the instruments and mood, but it's a little simple and dull. It needs more energy or substance. It's gets really repetitive after a while, and the effects you sneak in there starting around :45 don't really add much to it. It needs to lead somewhere more, although I like how it ends similarly to how it begins, even if it doesn't really loop that well. Sorry. I've been tough on you. It has potential; it just should be a little more engaging and varied in my opinion. Keep working on it, man. ;)

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