I liked the melody and the harmonies weren't that bad, but I didn't really like the instruments or the beat. It looped pretty well, but the mood threw me off- it just seemed a bit rough and bass-y to be upbeat like most 8-bit videogame music. I'm not saying it has to be upbeat- I'm just not sure what the mood you were going for here is, and I think you should make that clearer, while also giving it more direction and form. Hope this review helped you. Keep at it, man. ;)