I like the relaxed vibe at the beginning. I think the rapping is good. Vocals sound well-mixed and compressed, and full and rich to the ear, which probably means you used some kind of chorus effect and/or autotune. Lyrics are a little cliche, but I did enjoy the rhyme scheme. I would suggest filling in the texture on the instrumental a little more; those pads and the beat alone is fine for the verses, but once the chorus comes around I think you want people to know it’s the chorus. It’s a fun piece, but you could’ve done so much more with it compositionally. Overall, it just seems a little lack-luster. I didn’t notice any problems with the mixing or anything, though. Keep at it, man!
5.5/10