I like the lullaby-like sensation I get from the beginning, and then the sense of mystery and adventure from :23. It's a very well-crafted mood and atmosphere. Very interesting bridge you got there at :56. It was a rather excellent idea for providing structural relief IMO. I love the progression of this piece, and the percussion at around 1:30 - 1:50 was a nice touch. It certainly has plenty of dynamic contrast and structural variety. You kind of flip-flop back and forth between a more tranquil mood and an adventurous one. One slight problem I had with it was that the ending seemed light and majestic enough, but then the perfect octave with the low brass sort of growled at me. That's really just a tiny detail, though. I thought the mixing was pretty good, too. I might point out just one transition I thought needed smoothing out: 1:29. You also borderline overused those crashes IMO, especially since they were so up-front in the mix. However, those are pretty much all the complaints I can think of. Nice work, ChronoNomad! ;)