I liked the effect you used at the beginning, but it seemed a little arbitrary in my opinion. The intro has a house sort of feel to it, especially with the little blips at the ends of phrases, which I liked. I still think you overused the "woohs" a bit at :22, although I liked what you did with the filtering there. The part at :30 feels like more of a breakdown than a verse, which you seem to be using it as. I think you need to work a lot on structure and cohesion because the part at 2:44 seemed a bit out-of-place, as well as the instrument at the very end. I'll even go so far as to say that it was a pretty hasty and lazy way to end the piece, and I expected a more climactic ending from you, TastyTeo. I also think the clap at 2:28 sounded a little too industrial for a piece like this. I'm sorry about the mostly negative review. It's clearly a well-mastered piece with some cool instruments and melodies. I'm just being tough on you because you're practically already famous, man! ;) Most of these comments are very picky. I'll also say that I admire your loyalty to a very traditional genre of music amidst a web community that's increasingly becoming associated with more "radical" genres of music. That said, I also encourage growth through experimentation. Above all, keep up the good work, DJ Theof. ;D