I appreciate the attempt at emotion and all, but I don't think that piano instrument at the beginning really felt...powerful and full enough, y'know? However, I do like the pop-rock feel to it you incorporate in there after about 1:00. You also incorporated the Summer Set samples well. I thought some of your transitions could've been smoother, though, like at 2:00, 2:39, and 3:18. Btw, you probably already noticed, but that Summer Set sample cuts off a little early on "Love." ;) I liked the ending, and it definitely has potential. I just think it needs to flow more. Keep at it, JQiscool. ;)