I like the minimal rhythmic synth at the beginning and the breathy vocals that come in shortly thereafter. The crisp beats and synth arpeggios pair well with the vocals, although the transition into :56 could’ve been a tad smoother. The echo-y vocal sample at 1:28 is also a nice fit. You’ve concocted a dense rhythmic texture from the vocal samples and synths here, which is both catchy and has a strong atmospheric appeal. I think the part at 1:44 with the added vocal layering is my favorite part of the piece. The build-up into 2:56 was a bit too dragged-out for my tastes, but it did indeed provide a smoother transition into the post-chorus. In fact, I might’ve liked to have the more gradual build-up into the first refrain, and the more abrupt transition into the post-chorus during the second one. The vocals get a tad repetitive by the end of the piece, and I would have liked for you to vary the refrain and post-chorus a little more the second time around compared to the first one. Also, a proper outro would’ve helped wind down the piece a little more. Still, I enjoyed the sound design, production quality, upbeat mood, rhythmic content here, despite the composition needing a tad more variety and flavor at times. Overall, you’ve made a catchy and fun track with a strong atmospheric appeal, Mauxus. Keep it up! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.25/10