I like the cutesy synth riff at the beginning and the gradual additional layering. The nature effects are a nice atmospheric touch, and overall the piece has a great sense of build over the first minute. The distorted breaks at :58 were a tad bizarre and tinny, but they provide an evocative element of contrast when juxtaposed with the easy-going melodies at 1:20. The texture of the piece certainly has an experimental vibe overall, but the level of variety and high quality of the mix and sound design are engaging and fun. It was really interesting to read the narrative description here because it doesn't really match what I pictured at all. :) For me, there's clearly an element of conflict here between the fluttery, distorted textures and the flowing melodic parts. Either way, really cool piece at the end of the day! Keep it up, guys. ^^