I like the crisp percussion and the rhythmic elements. The bass is a little cheesy, but a bigger problem for me is the thin, quiet mix. Try turning the volume on the master down about 5 db when you start your project and then getting back up to par with compression/reverb/other effects during the mastering process. Still, the mix is clean, and I like the progression a lot. Sound design only gets better as the piece goes on - I think my favorite is the atmospheric synth at 1:20. The little risers (like at 1:27) and phasing effects (1:40) are also nice details. Overall, sounds like a solid start to a piece. Let me know when you finish this! ^^