Catchy and fun! :D Cool instruments, well-structured, smooth-flowing. Maybe it could be a little more unique, but other than that it's a really solid track. Are you planning on uploading the full version to NG sometime? :D
Catchy and fun! :D Cool instruments, well-structured, smooth-flowing. Maybe it could be a little more unique, but other than that it's a really solid track. Are you planning on uploading the full version to NG sometime? :D
Hey thanks man! I will definitely upload it when I'm done with it! cheers
I love the mood and instruments. This is a very engaging track, and the vocals added a lot to it, as well as the organ. I love how it's constantly changing, and the music really tells a story. It even loops pretty well. Well-structured, smooth-flowing, fantastic harmonizing. Amazing work! :D
thanks dude that means alot im getting better :D
I like the beat at the beginning and the effect at :16. It's catchy and cool and I like the instruments a lot. It could've progressed a little faster at times, and I think the synth at 1:01 is a little too loud. I like your melodramatized transitions, though, and the relaxed break-down section at 1:45 was really interesting as well. I especially liked the piano and how you started transitioning back into the more energetic part around 3:00. I still think the synth is too loud at 3:14, but I like the structure overall. I liked the club-ish ending, but it was a little sudden. Maybe you could even turn this into a loop. Overall, it's a solid piece. I think you have a fair chance a getting in. Good luck! ;)
Thank you for your kind words. I try to work to the best of my ability with any music I create. Reading your reveiw only helps me to get better as an artist. Thanks!
I like the instruments and effects (especially the crash). It's climactic and catchy. It could've progressed a little faster in my opinion, but I love the part at 1:23. You really brought out that summer-dance-party-like mood! :D I also like the melody that pops in around 2:00. Towards the end, it really has a nice, full sound too! I like how it ends like it begins. Excellent work! ;D
Thanks a lot!
I like the ominous mood at the beginning, but the beat felt a little too energetic for that [electric piano?]. I like the angry bass at :43, but I wish it progressed a little faster and was more varied. I strangely liked when you combined the electric piano with the bass at 1:40, but it was still very repetitive. I think you need more layers of sound here to add a little more substance/ variation. The ending caught me off guard - I like it, though. Overall, I think you have the skeleton of a piece; it just needs more variation/ substance, as I said. Keep at it, man! ;)
Thanks for the review! There was only about about fifteen minutes of work, so it's very early on. It's nowhere near where it will be on completion!
I love the dreamy guitar and simplicity of this. It has a beautiful, warm mood. You varied it pretty well, too. Smooth-flowing, well-structured, and I like the ending a lot, too. Some of the instruments sound a little harsh at some points, but overall I like it a lot. Great for some light listening. Good job! ;)
I love the instruments and beat and mood. I wish it progressed a little faster at some points, though. I definitely like the little melodies that start appearing around :48 and the climactic nature of it. I love the string-like instrument that comes in at 3:35, as well as the creepy effects throughout. I like the structure and transitions, and it really goes somewhere as a whole. I also love the ominous-sounding percussion at 7:40, but I thought you could've made the ending a bit more climactic/ interesting. Overall, awesome work as always! I'm really looking forward to "Showdown" as well. Do you have any updates on that, btw? :D
Hi. I'm Andrew. Audio portal junkie since 2010, supporter since 2017. I always want to improve what I do! I make music, run the NGUAC, post poetry on BBS, and am the all-time #2 audio reviewer. I love this site, and I want to make it the best I can! ^_^
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