I like the instruments and mood. The melody creates a sense of stumbling somehow. I imagined an overweight, drunk Southern man waddling through a ghost town as if he was the mayor! XD It's a short, feel-good piece. Nice work! ;D
I like the instruments and mood. The melody creates a sense of stumbling somehow. I imagined an overweight, drunk Southern man waddling through a ghost town as if he was the mayor! XD It's a short, feel-good piece. Nice work! ;D
Thanks very much :) I think you've just described my life...apart from being Southern .
I like the dreamy mood at the beginning, but I don't like that aggressive-sounding instrument that starts around :30. It doesn't really fit with the otherwise blissful mood, so it sounds a little out-of-place to me. Some of your transitions felt a little too busy and angry, like around 1:30. It got better after 2:00, and I like the part at 2:45 a lot, as well as the melody at 5:12. I like the ending too. However, I must be honest in saying that I like your original work better. I'm looking forward to your collab, and also to August 25th. ;D
Thanks man. I guess the fact that I didn't put as much dedication into this as my other tracks showed for you. I personally like the bass that I bring in at 0:30, and I wanted to use Massive for the first time lol, but I understand that it isn't exactly everybody's cup of tea. My mind wanted to do a kind of mix of the two moods, and it worked for my ears. -shrugs- And I'm rambling.
Thank you again, it's always nice to see a review from you. I'll have the collab up here soon, and the date...well, I'll get back to you guys on that.
The melody was instantly engaging, and I love the variation and energy. It's very melodic and catchy. Cool instruments, smooth-flowing, well-structured. Maybe you could add a little more substance around :45 - 1:05, and make the ending a little more interesting. Overall, it's another short, but cool piece, Johnfn! :D
Yeah I think you're right about the :45 to 1:05 section, I was a little lazy with that melody, but I didn't know what else to do. (Maybe a 8 bit breakdown?) Without you reviewing my stuff my songs would feel pretty lonely, so thanks a lot for dropping by!
Catchy and fun! :D Cool instruments, well-structured, smooth-flowing. Maybe it could be a little more unique, but other than that it's a really solid track. Are you planning on uploading the full version to NG sometime? :D
Hey thanks man! I will definitely upload it when I'm done with it! cheers
I love the mood and instruments. This is a very engaging track, and the vocals added a lot to it, as well as the organ. I love how it's constantly changing, and the music really tells a story. It even loops pretty well. Well-structured, smooth-flowing, fantastic harmonizing. Amazing work! :D
thanks dude that means alot im getting better :D
I like the beat at the beginning and the effect at :16. It's catchy and cool and I like the instruments a lot. It could've progressed a little faster at times, and I think the synth at 1:01 is a little too loud. I like your melodramatized transitions, though, and the relaxed break-down section at 1:45 was really interesting as well. I especially liked the piano and how you started transitioning back into the more energetic part around 3:00. I still think the synth is too loud at 3:14, but I like the structure overall. I liked the club-ish ending, but it was a little sudden. Maybe you could even turn this into a loop. Overall, it's a solid piece. I think you have a fair chance a getting in. Good luck! ;)
Thank you for your kind words. I try to work to the best of my ability with any music I create. Reading your reveiw only helps me to get better as an artist. Thanks!
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