I like the beat at the beginning and the effect at :16. It's catchy and cool and I like the instruments a lot. It could've progressed a little faster at times, and I think the synth at 1:01 is a little too loud. I like your melodramatized transitions, though, and the relaxed break-down section at 1:45 was really interesting as well. I especially liked the piano and how you started transitioning back into the more energetic part around 3:00. I still think the synth is too loud at 3:14, but I like the structure overall. I liked the club-ish ending, but it was a little sudden. Maybe you could even turn this into a loop. Overall, it's a solid piece. I think you have a fair chance a getting in. Good luck! ;)