Sorry for the slow response! I still really like the dreamy atmosphere and sound design here. You did a good job of toning down the reverb too. The mix is a lot sharper now, although still a bit quiet. If there's one section where you could still curb some more reverb, it might be around the 4-minute mark. The brass chord hits at 1:03 seem a bit incomplete, and there's some dissonance in the texture at around 2:30 when that string line comes in. The progression is a bit slow-paced at times, and I still feel like the arrangement has more of a meandering style than one centered around a strong narrative appeal. That makes the piece seem to drag a bit after 6 minutes. Still, there are a lot of great atmospheric riffs here - soothing bells, orchestral flourishes, etc. Great for a cinematic soundtrack or something. Impressive work overall, Tetrahedrix! Certainly much improved. ^_^