TaintedLogic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commercials]

This is spammy and annoying. What I found really odd was that the text seemed to be trying to say something informative or at least substantive, but the vocals were really distracting and goofy. I know it's supposed to be a comedy, but I think it's too repetitive to be funny. Maybe it would help if you did more with the graphics besides a white backdrop and black text. Not my thing, man. Sorry.

[Prickly bum]

This is pretty cool. The animation quality is good, and I like the music. It doesn't really loop that well, though, and could use some more structure. I think it would be better if you expanded on it a bit. Still, nice work, though. ;)

chronicbite responds:

Right, so maybe i should have explained this. This is not an original entry per say. It is a 6 sec contribution that will be par of a biger project. The chalenge was to interpret the music however we wanted... Thanks anyway for the revew, i really wish i had more time to work on this.

[the surgical room]

Haha, this is pretty funny. I love the sound effects and the music. Animation quality isn't bad either. It got kind of predictable after a little while, but you kept it short enough so that it wasn't overly redundant. Keep up the good work, man. ;)

[Running Short]

The animation quality is pretty good, but I think this could've really used some more plot/dialogue. There isn't even any sound - some music would really help make this more interesting. I'm not sure why it needed to be almost 2 minutes long either. You should keep working at it! ;)

ZairikAzrael responds:

Mostly for testing purposes, to go through the process to see if my machine could render it, convert it, upload it, otherwise there's no point trying for a longer animation next time. Also, YouTube has a thing about videos under 60 seconds, even if it's 59 seconds, and also it'll round down a second sometimes as well even when I've tried in Adobe Premiere. Audio wasn't a concern as much as the rest, and I didn't feel like pasting some creative commons or royalty free bland music over it. I will have more to show in my work on my next animation.

[Splat'n]

I like the facial expressions and the sound effects. The plot was a little hard to follow between the scenes, but overall I like it. Keep up the solid work, man. ;)

[Little Alien Man #1]

Hahaha, I love all the facial expressions and sound effects. It was pretty neat (and fitting) that the butterfly was the only thing in color. I thought it was funny in a dark sort of way when the alien pulled out the gun at :26, and the music just adds to the innocent-little-alien-oh-wait-no effect. ;D Great work, man!

[A day at the office]

Hahaha, this is really cool! I love all the sound effects, and as far as claymations go this might just be among the best I've seen on NG. The figurines and claw thing were really well-made, and the slow pace at the beginning makes the ending quite melodramatic indeed, almost comical. Great work, man. ;D

[Juan and Carlos]

Not bad. Voice acting is pretty good, and the animation quality is higher than average for NG. I might recommend using some reverb/flanger effects if you were going for a sort of spooky ending, instead of just increasing the volume on the laughter. It's really short as it is, though. You should expand more upon this idea. ;)

JoeMcFatman responds:

thank's man really appreciate the feed back

[The raptor king of earth]

This is pretty cool. I like the story, but the voice acting might need some work. You speak in a monotone a lot, and often you don't enunciate your speech very well. Also, having a narrator for the entire story instead of voice actors for the individual characters kind of dulls the drama IMO. Still, it was a pretty neat idea. ;)

[Let's Go to Minecon]

Hmm...the voice acting and animation were really good, and the plot was pretty amusing. I thought the facial expressions were particularly well done. The language was bothering me a bit, though. I think this should be rated "M," not "T." Otherwise, it was definitely entertaining throughout. Nice work! ;)

sweetcommando responds:

hmmmm yea, might have to change that