This is really cool, and a nice surprise that you're extending your skills on NG to the realm of movies. ;) I don't know much about animation, but I think you did a really good job for your first film, and I like the attempt at plot development and all. That said, it was kind of hard to follow the story. I was confused by the end. Overall, though, I liked it a lot. You have real potential, my friend, and I loved the music, btw! :D